Your arguments are not correct. It seems you are mixing up or ignoring the quantifiers.
For your first claim:
You are trying to show that $\{f_n\}$ is not uniformly integrable. The definition of uniform integrablity states that something is true for all $\epsilon>0$. So if a sequence is not uniformly integrable, that something must be false for some $\epsilon>0$. Here, as it turns out, you can take $\epsilon=1/2$; this will be the $\epsilon$ that "doesn't work" in the definition.
So, set $\epsilon=1/2$. We then have to show that the following is not true:
$\ \ \ $There is a $\delta>0$ such that for every set $B$ with $\mu(B)<\delta$, we have $\int_B|f_n|<1/2$ for all $n$.
So, we have to show that, given $\delta>0$, there is a set with measure less that $\delta$ but with the integral of some $f_n$ over that set greater than or equal to $1/2$. Towards this end, you can do the following:
Let $\delta>0$. Choose $1/N<\delta$. Then $\mu([0,1/N])<\delta$, but $\int_{[0,1/N]} |f_N|=N\cdot{1\over N}=1$.
Since $1>1/2$, we are done.
For the second claim:
I would argue directly: "We will show $\{g_n\}$ is not tight".
The definition of tightness says that something is true for all $\epsilon>0$. So you have to show that that something is not true for some $\epsilon>0$. As it turns out
you can take $\epsilon=1/2$; this will be the $\epsilon$ that "doesn't work" in the definition.
What "doesn't work" here is the following:
$\ \ \ \ $There is a set $B$ of finite measure with
$\int_{X\setminus B} |g_n|<1/2$ for all $n$.
So we have to show the above statement is not true. So, we have to show that for any $B$ with finite measure, the following does not hold: $\int_{X\setminus B} |g_n|<1/2$ for all $n$.
So, let $\mu(B)$ be finite. $B$ is fixed now, and your task is to show that for some $n$,
$\int_{X\setminus B} |g_n|\ge1/2$.
Once you've done this, you'll have your result.
A hint for this: since the measure of $B$ is finite there is an $n$ with $\mu\bigl((X\setminus B)\cap[n,n+1]\bigr)\ge1/2$.