The series $\sum_{j=1}^{\infty} y_j(\omega)$ converges for almost all $\omega$ for which $\sum_{j=1}^{\infty} p_j(\omega)$ converges, and conversely.
Let $\omega$ such that $\sum_{j=1}^{\infty} y_j(\omega)$ converges, then by the non-negativity
$$x_n(\omega) \leq \sum_{j=1}^n y_j(\omega) \leq \sum_{j=1}^{\infty} y_j(\omega)<\infty,$$
hence $\limsup_{n \to \infty} x_n(\omega)<\infty$. Now it follows from Theorem 4.1 that $\lim_{n \to \infty} x_n(\omega)$ exists and is finite (up to a null set), and this, in turn, implies that $\sum_{j=1}^{\infty} p_j(\omega)<\infty$.
Conversely, if $\sum_{j=1}^{\infty} p_j(\omega)<\infty$ for some $\omega$, then
$$\liminf_{n \to \infty} x_n(\omega) \geq - \sum_{j=1}^{\infty} p_j(\omega)>-\infty$$
and again we find $\lim_{n \to \infty} x_n(\omega)<\infty$ (up to a null set) implying $\sum_{j=1}^{\infty} p_j(\omega)$.
This proves the assertion.